Since I have almost completly filmed and edited my music video I have decided to show a few people who would be in my target audience what they think to the video.
Below are some writtern comments from differents individuals:
Criticism
"It doesnt make sense" - (only one person had this issue)
"The change in lighting bothers me"
Issues with swapping form wet to dry
The CGI is unrealistic
The beating at the end is unconvincing
The CGI work is jumpy
Could use some conventional time travel ideas?
The genre of the video is undefined - cant tell if its cheesy or not
The "birthmark" on the right heart - Ruins the symetry.
Praise
Hit in the face with flowers
"The feather duster is genious!"
"The climbing through the bed sequence is awesome!"
"The emotional bit with the projection is really good"
Sequence where main character looks back on himself is very clever
Ending is fun and clever
Really good acting from Jamie
Lipsinking has been done well and theres not too much singing
The dinosaur is so cool!!
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